I just finished revising part of my third paper. After reviewing my last paper, it seemed that I don't go in depth enough at times. I'm going to post part of my paper on here. Maybe I'll get some feed back from you guys to help me to improve it. :D Thanks.
While walking down the hall of the fourth floor, I could hear music booming from someone’s computer. I followed the noise and ended up at the study lounge. It was a little after ten at night, and we had just finished having a floor meeting. During the day it seems that no one is in the study lounge. It is after ten that students start heading there and it seems to me that they use it as more of a “party” lounge than a study lounge. Upon reaching the location of the sound, a stench protruded my nostrils and almost made me sick. The smell was a combination of various food items that had just been delivered. Jimmy Johns, Papa Johns, First Wok, all of these food smells were mixing in the air of the lounge and creating some pretty funky fumes.
After reacting to the smell, I looked around and noticed that every single lamp that was in the room was turned on whether someone was sitting by it or not. The light blue couches were completely empty, but the chairs around the tables in the middle of the room were packed with students and their projects. They had pulled the three tables together in the middle of the room to create one massive platform to study upon. A group of six to eight girls were in there attempting to make it through mid term week. The room is quite small, so it gets extremely hot when a lot of bodies are in it. All of these observations were interesting to take in and after viewing them, I was ready to determine how those influences could hinder or enhance the studies of those students.
Later that night, I went up to the sixth floor to attend a floor program that was being held in that social lounge. It is not uncommon to have these floor programs in the social lounge because they are three times the size of the individual floor lounges. The sixth floor lounge on that particular night was very cold and deserted, except for those of us who were there for the tie dying event. On one side of the room, there are vending machines to satisfy any hunger or thirsty you may acquire while hanging out or studying. On the other side of the room, there is a ping pong table that has had its fair share of use over the years. It is common to see students attempting to beat each other in the monotonous game throughout the day.
This lounge contains a lot more furniture, ranging from large couches, to comfy chairs, to wooden tables and even a piano. At night, you can often hear people practicing their tunes on the piano on the sixth floor. The large space and partial seclusion from people is what makes this area a hot spot for study groups, hall council, floor activities, and any other dorm events that may occur. Take the tie dye party for example, the fourth floor decided to tie dye shirts together, but obviously there is no where large enough to do that on our floor. This is where the spacious sixth floor lounge comes in handy. It is rarely packed with people and if there are people there they are more than willingly to give you some of the space.
There are a few rules that apply to the lounges of Studebaker East. The study lounges on each individual floor are to be used as study lounges. Any sort of music, videos, or conversations are to be taken elsewhere so those who need to study can. This is recent problem on some floors. As mentioned earlier, the fourth floor likes to socialize in their study lounge. It was brought up at the last floor meeting though, that things had to change, and ever since then the lounge has been used to enhance the scholarly portion of student’s lives. It is the duty of those who use the lounges to keep them. If food is brought into the lounge, then the mess is to be picked up before you leave. Furniture is not to be taken from the lounges (social or study). If any furniture is missing, residents of the floor will be charged a fee until the missing items have been returned. This was a problem in the past, but there have been no issues this year. There might be some rules when it comes to hosting events in the sixth and first floor social lounge, but this is something I have not discovered yet. Hopefully, I can meet with someone who will be able to answer that question after spring break.